Final Reflection After handing in my brochure and looking around the room at everybody else’s work, I am happy to say that I am proud of how far I have come, alongside everybody else in the class. This assessment was definitely challenging and a big step up from last years core paper’s as I found…
6.1 Rationale
Rationale The Break Up guide provides the best spots to go to for comfort food when experiencing the different emotions of a break up. The break up guide takes you on a journey through tears of sadness, punches of anger, and laughter of happiness, effectively leading you through the recovery of a break up. Using…
6.1 Brochure Final
Brochure Final Before printing my final brochure I printed a test on regular paper, which I have labeled “Brochure Refinement” in my book. This was my last critique which I did to my own work to make the last changes before printing my final. In this self-critique, I wrote on my brochure regarding what I…
6.1 Discover Wellington Spread Refinements
Discover Wellington Spread Refinements In the final feedback, I was told to work on my discover wellington spread. I was told that my type layout was fine but I needed to work on my map. I was told that the typography layout for my final would depend on my map and the positioning of my…
6.1 Map Refinements
Map Refinements After receiving the final feedback for my map I began to make changes and refine it further. I first removed the title and the key to my map because I was told that they were unnecessary, I added more streets, and I played around with hand drawing parts of my map but I…
6.1 Category Spread Refinements
Category Spread Refinements This spread was very important to refine because I kept getting feedback about the ‘regional fare’ text being too floaty and the page not flowing very nicely with the rest of the brochure. I have refined the spread by first making sure that the heading is in line with the headings on…
6.1 Cover Refinements
Front Cover I have refined my front cover by dulling down the yellow colour in the shape to ensure that it doesn’t shout out. I have also taken on the feedback I received in class and moved my guide to text to the top underneath the break up heading and made the size of the…
6.1 Feedback
Feedback I have just received the final feedback for my brochure before I hand it in on Thursday. So this feedback will guide the final changes to my brochure. Front Page Dull down the yellow so that it matches the same yellow in my Arborist spread. A guide to text can be smaller and moved…
5.2 Destination Spread Refinements
Destination Spread Refinements For my visual system, I tried to do exactly what my feedback suggested because I am feeling a bit lost with how to enhance them. For the Lashings refinement, I dulled down the tear line and overlayed it into the collage and I increase the brightness of the brownie so that it…
5.2 Category Spread Refinements
Category Spread Refinements From the interim presentation, I was told that my category spread needed a lot of work so I tried to fix the alignment and make the title the same size as the other pages to make it more cohesive. I tried adding colour behind the lists to try to make them group…
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