Feedback

In class, we all received feedback on our work and where we are at. For me, my feedback was surrounding my category spread development. The key points for refinement were about the typography within the paragraphs. I was told never to break names, never to break places and never to break facts. So I need to go through and look at the details of the text to ensure that none of these things has been broken up. With regard to my collage I received the same feedback as I have been, I need to create more control. I am completely aware of this and I just need to hurry up and start producing some more developments with my collage because if I am being honest, I am continuously putting it to the side and focusing on my typography layouts instead.

Note: Jason was liking my destination spread developments so now he wants me to also focus on creating a mock-up of my brochure so that we can see everything all put together. This will allow for a better critique of my work because the alignments will be more clear throughout the brochure and it will be seen as a whole.