Destination Spread Refinements

For my visual system, I tried to do exactly what my feedback suggested because I am feeling a bit lost with how to enhance them. For the Lashings refinement, I dulled down the tear line and overlayed it into the collage and I increase the brightness of the brownie so that it matched the interior of the destination better. For Midnight Espresso I did a line drawing of the fist to add some more anger into the collage and made the light and texture overlay on top of the fist so that it wasn’t just placed there. For The Arborist collage I added a line drawing on top of the photo of the lips to make it connect better with the style of the eye and the first in the previous spreads. I have also dulled down the background colour of the yellow because it was previously yelling. I have also layered the texture and image on top of the lips to create a better composition. In each of the destination spreads I have added the icon information but in words, because I feel as though adding in icons wouldn’t work particularly for mine since my three lots of information is the address, the opening hours and the website.