Discover Wellington Refinements I was really struggling with my Discover Wellington spread, as I found it difficult positioning the text and the map on the page in a cohesive way so I did 9 more refinements to try to find the right layout. Within these refinements, I created a new composition for the text, which…
5.2 Map Developments
Map Developments After the interim presentation, I developed my map and took on the suggestion of removing the colours and simplifying the map. Currently, I can’t decide if I prefer the map with or without the two black roads and Te Papa, so I will ask for feedback in class. I am also thinking that…
5.2 Cover Refinements
Front Cover After the second interim presentation, I began to develop my brochure. I first worked on the cover and took in the feedback of overlapping the colours to fit better with the style of my brochure and I changed the name to “Break Up” which simplified the text, allowing me to add in “A…
5.2 Interim Presentation Feedback
Feedback from my Group We were put in groups of 3 and within these groups, we had to critique each other’s work and provide feedback to one another. In my group, there was Chris, Erika and I and I found that I received some good feedback. For my map, try to remove the background colours…
5.2 Interim Presentation
Interim Presentation This is what I handed in for my interim presentation. All of the work in the photos above have been previously documented on my blog. The only change is that my name and my lectures names are on the back cover. I am looking forward to receiving feedback for my brochure, because I…
5.1 Front and Back Cover Concepts
Front Cover Concept My original plan for my front cover was to use the same line drawing style I have used throughout my brochure, however, I began to draw some broken hearts and I really didn’t like the drawings. To be honest, my drawings reminded me of what I would draw when I was in…
5.1 Visual System Developments
Midnight Espresso I have developed my original concept for Midnight Espresso further to fit with the Lashings development for my visual system. I have revealed more of the location in the top left and the bottom right corners, I have added in a fist to show the emotion of anger and I have finally changed…
5.1 Discover Wellington Spread Refinements
Discover Wellington Spread Refinements I have refined my Discover Wellington Spread layouts by adding in my map, but I know these will not be my final spreads. Now that I am writing about them, I have realised that I need to add a key to the map so that people can understand what I am…
5.1 Map Concepts
Map Concepts I have begun to develop some concepts for my map, however, I am not a fan of any of them. I know I shouldn’t be saying that but I am just being honest and I am struggling with the map completely. I can confidently say that maps just aren’t my forte… I think…
5.1 Map Exercise
Map Exercise In class, we had to do an exercise where we had to map out our journey to uni that day and our table misheard and we all mapped out our three destinations for our brochure, which was in fact very helpful. This was the first time I had actually seen my three places…
Studio IIA 